Voted For: Murdz

Murdz
1. Nice wordplay in the first line.... sedond like was aight.. good wp... 8/10
2. haha good line... nice wp.. and setup.. 8/10
3. kinda played first line.... nice second line though.. really brought up the first line... 7/10
4. haha not bad first line... and second line was good too.. both nice wp.. and metas... 8/10
5. haha nice line.. one of the better ones.... 8/10
6. ehhh not feelin it as the rest of ur verse.. i get it.. its just not somethin i would go OOOO at... 6/10

Timmayy
1. not bad line.. not amazing.. first line.. hot plate was kinda wack.. 6/10
2. aint a bad line.. nice personal... 7/10
3. errr not feelin it.. worded funny.. work on that 6/10
4. not bad line.... good wp.. ish.... 8/10
5. not feelin it.. considering i know you meant it to be a punch.. but the herb line was kinda weak.. 6/10
6. ooo good shot at the end.. only the last line though.. the first line.. GARBAGE...sorry but beat like a drum had nothing to do with the bar.... wack...6/10

Overall Murdz got this.. he came harder his wordplay was a lot better... and his overall verse was more consistant than tims...... tims i suggest u work on your wordplay and complexity.. and try not to force rhymes... like the first one with hot plate.. that was wack... sorry.... anyways good luck to both of you..

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