Voted For: Dizzee Rascal

Tired of fucking ho's, ya wackness shows, that your whole careers is fable
So, Naming ya clothes, is the only time celerity able to sign a label
^^weak opener
ya seem strange cus, like physcho porn stars i maime pus
Quick to aim cus? Disect this herb with a B/bee still wouldn't be famous..
^^still weak
Too slick for ya fate ho, Hit ur face wiv the str8 atleast ur revival hood splits
Prick ill str8 blow up your temple like suicidal buddhists
^^^decent
Hope ya dont choke, embarrassed so much go ahead try and gloat
Ima showboat, throwing Cell 'of verse' how i break this choir boys throat
^^OK
Prove verbal abuse, decapitate any bystanders to crews aint for you
End this feud, the way i contain cell voters yelling "CELL-U-LOSE/CELLULOSE
^^best line,beautiful wordplay

Conclusion-Ur starting of the verse was weak.But it just got better and better as it went on.That last line was one of the best I've seen.Nice verse.


wreck with text? nah, you just a wreck with text
I'll have you 'scrambling for your life' like imprisoned breakfast chefs
^^decent
start re-thinking your timing, I laugh at your thoughts of besting me
when I ran over your brain I must’ve jogged your memory
^^nah,played
i'll shred till I slice through... pound till your rotten
pound till your chest is caved in as deep as Bin Laden
^^again...played
tearing through... I hate your guts, I got them on my stitching
so I'll give you a dirty look like unqualified cosmeticians
^^decent
watch me pin him, then pin my ribbon... just bow and take the L
the loss gots you kicking yourself like you tore your ACL
^^simple

Vote-Some ur punchlines were adequate...but not anything st8.Ur flow was bassically the same as dizzie.Ur punchlines lack complexity which rascal had.

Vote-dizzie rascal
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