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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Wow, Both Had Seriously Weak Punches...
You Guys Gotta Work On That Alot...
Chi Actually Had Settups For Good Punches...
But NEVER Fallowed Through And Just Rambled On With A Bunched Of Crap...
Chi Structure Was Also Really Off...
Your Syllable Count Was Horrible...
Some Lines Wrapped The Page And Some Only Covered Half...
You've Got A Bit Of Work Mayn...
Uuuum In Terms Of Flow...
Masta Had Alot More Of A Stable Flow...
While Chi's Lack Of Structure Ruined His Flow For Me...
So Ya, Thats Whats Up...
Mastamind Definately Took This Battle...
But Both Of You Should Really Work On Elevating...
Stay Up And Keep Writing...
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