not bad man.....haha, pretty much just self-glor eh....ahh well, it was pretty entertaining

all i suggest, is maybe up the complexity of your rhymes a little more, but this had really good flow and i pictured a bumping beat, it was pretty fun reading this yo, haha....yeah, and up vocab a little more, maybe get some wordplay....but overall, this would make a pretty good song if you get a good beat, keep up man

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