This entire piece was dope. I was feeling just about everything in there...you had some good emotion, nice structure, and a good amount of vocabulary in there too. But, some of ya shit seemed like it was forced in certain areas of the verse, just about everything else was tight though man. I was mainly feeling this bar the most..

He walks in, the silent makes him curious, but still he's a lunatic
Heavily breathing from his lungs to the nostrils. ooo he's so caustic

This had good imagery and I was feeling the emotion..dope shit right here.

Good overall piece Tweetlet.

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