This was a fairly close one in my opinion... Stanza, yours was pretty aiite, failry good imagery, good struc, and I liked the pathetic fallacy you gave.

What acuity has here is usually described as an "Epic poem". Which is a poem about heroes. I found his to be a little more indepth than stanza because of this, and because of his style, diction and flow.

I think that both styles are very unique, but my vote goes to Acuity because it was more delineative.

V/ Ac

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