Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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very nice piece here very good flowed all over nice vocab use u could do just a little bit better come up with different words to rhyme wit, very vivid and good word structure as well,
everythin here was good but dont rhyme simple words u had a good vocab words in the lines but then simple ones for the rhyme so wok on that also
but overall good piece very good i give it a 8.0/10
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL
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