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Old 06-06-05, 02:16 PM   #12
icy-hot
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This was feedback posted for Young Dollar

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young dolla....

u had a decent flow some decenet personals, no real hard hitting punches but some decent ones...
creativeness u could of been slightly better at that but none the less not a bad verse... 7.0/10

DAWG......
u had a ok flow * which was the best thing u had going for u in this battle* u could of came alot harder with punches/personal wordness it was more of a story then u rhymeing diss;ing him getting at him u feel me u need more celever lines and get more creative with them dont just use simple lines i can basicly finish befor i read the rest.... just keep elevating fam u will get better.....

3.5/10