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Old 06-06-05, 02:44 PM   #18
PrahJect
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Voted For: Pen N' Paper

Yo i give Pen dis one homie....he came harder...stronger punches and it landed harder....Yo kon you kept on sayin u were gonna use violence but what Ive learnt is tht to say tht over the net is stupid....ya feel me////pen ure verse was aiite but lacked in flow....half of it was funny n shit but the others were played out...for e.g.

I get on the internet and to rapverse and to battle text
This guy is a geek, no bitches, he gets on it to “cyber sex”

This was jokes.....but then however:


Yo this bitch wanna battle me he about to get hurt
Cuz this is just the second bar and this nigga is merked

Self gloryfying....no reall punch

Think u hard and ur rhymes are hard man everyone knows u wrong
Get outta this site bitch cuz RV is a place where u don’t just belong

Normally a battle is marked out by the best opening and ender...this ender was weak man.....neways keep up...pretty week battle but this goes to pen n paper
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