Poor rhymes and cliche. Wordplay didn't work. Try usin a topic that hasnt been used thousands of times and use more multis and complex rhymes. Lyrically it was disgusting and content wise it reeked. Also ur flow is kinda off in some parts but that wernt 2 much of a problam.

But hey hoo cares wat I think. Keep it up and ull get betta.

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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