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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP:
I liked this piece, there was good imagery and structure, and as was stated it seemed a lil forced, but not too bad......imagery was the best though, really made you feel you were there, keep it up
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i come from a time when you earned respect,
for your rhyme and the way you made words connect,
not the money that you made or the girls you sexed,
a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
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