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Old 06-07-05, 12:33 PM   #5
Daubs
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Voted For: Young Dollar

K- Trini you aint even hot enuff to be compared to an ~old lighter~
I should merk ya boy, so you'd be able to slap ya ~GhostWritter~

OK OPENER, PRETTY GOOD.

Quit messin Trini. I'll make ya so called Thug raps look ~mushy~
He dont wanna battle me he said rather lick ya mother's ~pussy~

NICE PERSONAL, WITHOUTE THE QUOTE IT WOULD HAVE BEEN WACKED AND PLAINED, AND NOT FEELIN "MUSHY"

Drink ya mom's period i think you'd rather drink ya daddy's ~cum~
Im into freaky shit, but i'd rather not be doing that shit incest ~son~

AGAIN NICE HITTIN PERSONAL...

Also ya battle was weak going up aginst dat ~ol' dirty mexican~
i'll have you shook in a battle you'd be scared to do ~Text again~

MEH WAS OK....

True story......i Dont have time to be fuckin wit a dis ~fly~weight
Even my girlfriend would get somebody to get this ~light~weight

NOT FEELIN IT...

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This cat's unsure of where he at,he ain't well/
His prof. says niggaville,but avatar says ATL./

OK PERSONAL, NO PUNCH THOUGH.

Can't ya see?ya a rookie battlin one of tha best/
Ur like a comma cause you allow me to take a breath/

NOPE, SO WHAT IF HE LETS YA TAKE A BREATH...

Face it,ya shuldn't have accepted,ya whack as shit/
Not even biting my style would ba an an antidote to it/

WTF.....NOT HITTING.

My rhymes sweeter than candy but to hard fo to bite/
I can see you lost a mile away despite my near sight/

NO PUNCHES IN YA BARS, MAINLY FILLERS...HERE AGAIN

To bend over in front a guy,you go give ya bike pegs/
Jackin off in a farm's the only way ya sperm'd reach an egg/

YOUR BEST BAR, WAS OK.

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TRINI, YOU ELEVATED...BUT YOUR STILL WACK ONE PUNCH (YOUR CLOSER HIT) BUT THE REST WERE FILLERS REALLY. STRUCTURE, VOCAB AND FLOW WAS PRETTY MINIMAL TOO.

YD GETS THIS DUE TO HIS PUNCHES HITTING, AND COMING HARDER WITH A LOT OF PERSONALS.

YOUNG, RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQ'ED.

YOU HAVE 3 DAYS.
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