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Old 06-07-05, 03:55 PM   #7
Ghost
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LoL Nice Piece From both Of Yall!Strucutre Was kind Of OFF in da SECOND Verse!Punches Were Kind Of Nice!Word N Rhymin Scheme Was Good! Use Of Vocab was Alright!other than that it was Pretty Good!Overall 8/10!Keep It Up Yall N Keep Droppin them "Flamez"!DEUCEZ!
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