overall it was decent, it wasnt consistant throughout the whole thing though, ill break it down


You been taken advantage of your whole life, your weak and have no respect..
Got no balls and couldn't take a reply, so decided to hate on someone dead..
^^ I didnt like how that rhymed at all

...And you got bullied at school, thats no suprise because all fat kids do..
Your so fuckin wack if you were a sports shop...............................
.....................................I still wouldn't step into your shoes!!
^^ very hot!! I loved the shoe line

Girls are insensitive?, Na your just an ugly fuck who lacks any compassion..
And your verses must be dressed in red and green............................
...................................The way they lack all senses of fashion!!
^^ eh, not very hard

And if your lifes is already hell,the way i own you, you can call me satan..
Herbs like him dissin me, im like misplaced cards...........................
.............................................The way im losing my patience!!
^^ decent, not too ill though


Overall your 2nd part was the best, the 1st and 3rd were weak and the 4th was decent....keep doin ya thang