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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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Mom never noticed what happened as I lay in bed and cried
She was working at the factory unaware of the pain in the room I lied
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We started to rob bnaks, and turned that profit to crack
Soon pulling 200 grand a week by sellin the goods to blacks
Crack epidemic reached its high, the entrepenuers of cash
Making the biggest deal of our lives, a mill producing coke/hash
5,000 lb the first day, Crips on top, we had a royalty mentality
On top of the Underworld, but about to crash in reality
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nice piece this had alot of potential nice vocab used this is a very good piece kinda stretched out try to cut it down or put . between verse ok cuz it just looks kinda stretched out but still good keep doin ya thing i liked the lines above from the piece it was good man ill like to see more pieces from u i see u got a lot of potential so keep doin ya thing man
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL
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