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Old 06-07-05, 07:18 PM   #3
L-A-C
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beat....is a classic but has been used so many times...but it's all jesus...first mc...damn he has some abstract style the way he approaches a beat...the flow is weird lol but it's cool cause it's different feeling it but it doesn't seem like it's natural u know what i mean....delivery is cool emotion is soild...overall his verse is a 6/10...the transition between him then you there should of been a chorus thrown in there cause it breaks the momentum of the track...ok second mc the flow seemed off cause it was so slow for this beat and it didn't really suit it well....delivery and emotion were ok but needs some work...lyrics were cool nothing like ohhhh...overall 6/10
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