ma man....ooooohhh tha shadowville trilogies

listening as i type

boom comes da hook...i like the concept...its soundin pretty nice..u shud send this 2 shadowville after uve let me jump on this 4 the last verse

here come lyrics...ye yeaa u bk 2 ur punchline flow...i like the u cnt escape ma bars like u locked in prison, simple but nice, i aint hearin da clicks DV sed bout...id say turn dem vocals up a lil nice...ur last line blends well with the hook, i like da way it overlaps...that bar incl. respirator line is defo nicest in verse...got ma head bumpin yo....nice shiznit omen keep em comin, ima have sum tracks up in next couple of days so feed em when u c em...1

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