Voted For: OneStepBeyond

stanza

Im One Step away from Goin Beyond Your Lyrical Status
If wackness Came In Pounds We Know Youd be the fatest
ehhh...decent...played concept...4/10
Over 1,000 Post & Training and yet Your Text Still aint right
Bcuz Youll Get No Votes Like the Replies in Your "Open Mic"
decent....5.5/10
This dude is Scared Stiff So ill Bury His Body 6 Feet deep
He Gonna Regamortis & Choke up as if he was battling me
weak....4/10
Yeah Last Time I No showed So now Im Bout to come back
This Dude Supplies Less Punchez Than a "Paraplegic" Match
that was the best punch in your whole verse...6/10

overall-19.5/40(49%)

Onestepbeyond:

Hes intimidating? Right.. I've finished waiting, land some hits?
You're a wannabe slim shady..... But we all know 'Stanz'a bitch,
good...culdve been worded better...6/10
Dropped from TBN, we'd beat them, knowin we ownin them punks,
...Chunkin a cup of kool-aid is the only way you throwin a punch,
jjjjjeeeessssssuuuuuussssss...that was so played...3/10
Come on dawg... don't handle it rudely, against me battlins loony,
Bitch the only time you grab a win is when you're handin it to me,
ehhhh....5/10...wasnt feelin it to much
"My internet was down, I ain't duck you," i've had enough of lies,
If the connection was down then why did your stats say other wise,*
skraight...couldve been worded better as well...6/10
O.G. don't talk about em' Drop an album, its still on the shelves,
Only way you makin the crowd 'clap' is if their killin themselves...
decent closer...6/10

overall-26/50(52%)

vote/onestepbeyond

Stanza...my advice to u is stop explainin so much shit in ur verses...most of them i was able to understand without u explaining...the only thing that should be explained is personals...and elevate ur wordplay......

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