Im scared of my past, but Im more scared-of-my-future/
Scared-Imma-Lose-Her to all the people who tear-and-abuse-her/

liked this line, content was good, multis nicely used

Im scared of a cheater, Im frightened-by-lies/
Frightened-by-cries that I hold back and fight-with-my-eyes/

good emotions, again with tha nice multies

I hide from feelings, I even coward-to-secrets/
My power-is-weakness when my heart gets devoured-to-pieces/

these was tha best multies throughout, good emotion

I hate relationships, I run-from-the-truth/
To get to the “root” of the problem like what’s under-my-tooth/

good wordplay

I flee-from-the-scene, with feelings deleted-from-me/
Beating-my-dreams it seems your not as speechless-as-me/

not as good, but it works

My heart is gentle now, I’m getting afraid-to-mess/
Been played-the-best that now Id rather just be laid-to-rest/

do sad nd dreary

Make no mistake though, my hearts-strong but long-gone/
My expressions just “cover” my feelings like coats to long-johns/

nice wordplay nd multies

My appearance is happy, but insides-are-red-hot/
In time-my-head-pops and I begin to cry till my eyes-see-red-dots/

not so good, too girly like lol, be a man!!

overall 7/10 .. nice piece.. return tha favor on 'returnin tha favor [maddrapper diss]'
thanks, peaCe.1

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