man cali....seriously, where does it say in poetry that you can't rhyme on sequential lines? and wtf does "stop and describe whats going on" man, seriously, how many times do i have to say, just because you think its not poetry, does not mean it aint'......get a fuckin' degree in english and maybe i'll respect your fucking opinion, until then, let people write the way the fucking want to write

poetry is self-expression you fat ass lard bitch, so let people express themselves however the fuck they want, with whatever words they want, whatever style they want.....jesus fuck kid

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