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Old 06-08-05, 09:24 PM   #6
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>Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
meh, basic 5/10
>Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
uhh, no 0/10, everthing wrong with this
>Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
not bad 5/10
>Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
pretty sure ive seen this concept, magic lines are played too 1/10
>Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
meh, boring 4/10

overall: 15/50....uhh, too many played concepts, no real personals....no effective punches, really need to work on alot man, overall, you had nothing that great, nothing stood out, nothing creative, elevate.

DAZ, uhh, you won, i liked the opener and closer, thats all you needed, the monster truck punch was weak and shitty though, too basic, but still, you won this and no need to break it down, good battle man.

v/daz. rtf on the link in my sig.
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