Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente

tweety- as follows are my fav bars
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As i smell the free non-populated air, I'm free, free from the abyss
The scars will heal. My tears are dry, and the whips will be perish
Finally getting myself and my daughter out of that house of hell
With a divorce papers in my hand, i knew everything in
.................................................. ........................near future will go well
My life changed forever once i got in that car, and drove off with my mom
With my window down, sun shining, the branches on the tree's staying strong
I felt the uneasiness‘, the ache in my stomach, as the nervousness’ crept
While i saw him in a police car, his face, o thy horrible face I will never forget

overall i wasnt feeling the structure but lookin beyond that you had great imagery n feelin in ya drop, some real emotion was protrayed in those bars i put uyp there, n the ending was pretty dope but i think you wouldve benifited from exploring the abuse ect that the child suffered, good drop, work on your text flow but you got most the rest on lock...good drop/............Daz
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hnic- the followin are my fav bars
"You knock me up and don't have the decency to marry me?"
Then she'll go on and on about the nine months she carried me
I'm an individual, but not so different u see
Cuz there's a million other kids who've lived tha same life as me
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overall, good grasp of the story n topic you protrayed..
i wouldve liked to see a little more emotion throughout the bars but it was heartfelt, although, you had the amount of lines to try n tell a more indepth story but you seemed to kinda ramble on at points..nontheless, good drop...Daz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!