Voted For: Kesse

DRAKEL

nice drop....
a difficult topic in my opinion but you approached it well and remained on topic all the way through.....a good structure to ya piece, the flow to it was excellent.....a few little multies in the verse itself helped with that...ya vocabs was nice, the rhyme scheme itself was only basici n a couple of bars, but mostly it was very complex.....the imagery delivered was dope, you made a nice picture of the contrast between light and dark with some very nice metaphors in which you defined the light and dark opposites well, i definitely liked the closing four lines, they ended the piece real nice and put an all round good end to the topic........9/10


DRAMA QUEEN

also, a good drop....
you had a nice structure to your piece also, a good flow although not as fluid as Drakel's...couldn't see any multies, not a necessity but they do help the flow go better and add something extra to ya drop....you approached the topic well, put a different spin on it and you managed to stay on throughout, rhyme scheme was cool...more basic in places than it was complex but it was still nice....imagery was nice and some nice emotion in your piece as always....i was feelin the verse throughout, just feel ya could have been a little less basic with ya vocabs........7.5/10

OVERALL
nice drops from both.....
i feel that Drakel had the better flow, he added multies in that helped him there, his vocabs were more complex than drama queen's and i think what helped him is he took a more direct approach to the topic and did a verse that put a good image on the whole thing, whereas DQ took a more complex approach which is good, i just dont feel that she pulled it off as good as it could've been done......

so my vote: DRAKEL

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