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Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
- The first line was a good wordplay...with a punch but the 2nd line was blah...

Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
-Alright Rv you sucked at life jokes are played, even though it's an personal you could've word that first line better, and the 2nd line, gay jokes are played aswell. Making this bar not a good punch.

Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
^^ Alright i like this, you had a wordplay with a personal and a punch, plus a metaphor decent bar punch.

Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
^^ Ha, i like this bar, had a wordplay and a personal. I like the 2nd line, but the 1st line wasn't good, the 1st line was boust to be a set up line toward the 2nd line making a punch, but the 2nd was a good punch.

Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
^^ Meh Ok closer. I think this was not effective, cause i've seen 1st and 2nd line use so many times. But an ok punch.

Overall=You had 2 dope bars in this verse, but the rest was shitty man, even though you had nice wordplays along with them the punches wasn't connecting or hard hitting.

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
^^ I like this bar of punch great meta, and ok set up line could've been better, but decent punch though, with a personal.

Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
^^ Meh didnt really feel that as a decent punch, it was "ok".......

You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
^^ I like this the 2nd line was a decent punch, but the 1st line was played out, stop with the gay jokes people.

You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid
^^ MUWHAHAHAHAHAHA nice punch, that was creative.

Overall=Daz you had a 1 or 2 mistakes in your verse. But the rest was good nice personal on the first line along with the wordplay and the meta. The best aspect in your verse was Punches and wordplays....

Conclusion=Alright Both had good verse, but i'm going to vote for Daz cause his punches (i felt) hit harder than monopoly. Monopoly verse was ok, the punches was not effective, the wordplays was great though, but i felt his punches wasn't hard hitting, next time word your sentence to make it a decent punch. I vote for daz because he had Less played lines and more hard hitting punches than monopoly.......

V/DAZ

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