decent opening ... first line was an ok set up, second line could have been better... wordplay=not bad, but feels kinda forced.. could have been executed better

3rd line= filler.. 4th line was decent, a lil stretched.. i thought the wordplay was creative, but better wording would have made it hit harder.. not bad though

5th line=filler/SG... 6th line was pretty funny lol.. pretty tight

7th line= tight set up line.. your best set up line yet... 8th line was blah... forced wordplay, the part you're playing off of isn't pronounced the same way as his name... wording was off and a lil stretched.. average

9th line.. blah, you talk about maiming filler when the line your using is filler... tenth line was a decent play off of his name

overall verse= 7.5/10

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