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Old 06-09-05, 01:12 AM   #9
kelsick39
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From: Illstate
This was feedback posted for ¤ÐÅž¤

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opener and closer won this battle no doubt........ i wanan give u negative scores for the two middle bars..... but even with that u killed himmm...... do i even need to explain, u had nice punches, personals, and name flips with the "poly" and cracker line, along with the setup to the second bar (which was penislicking at its finesT) ur 3rd bar was ok, and altho it had a very unique twist, the "tired" and "wheels" meta is gettin pretty played.... and than ur closer was hot

Monopoly had a pretty boring verse..... not much to say about besides the fact that it was bad.... i think ur only decent line was:
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'

and thats only because im hopin u sed it cuz that RV member named "Hattrick" Dr's him (i dont even know if he does, but thats the only way any of his bars were dope) but even with that assumption u still got killed.......

V/ this guy