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Led Poetic Your Verse Was The Best of The Two. Your Imagery and Emotion Was Incredible. I Loved The Structure of Your Verse As Well..It Felt Like A Real Touching Poetic Piece To Me. I Definitly Got Into It After The First Line and Just Kept Reading. It Was So Intimate and Personal...

Valor, Yours Hit More As A Song Style Which Really Took Away From The Poetical Feel. If This Was A Collaboration for Just For A Song This Woulda Worked, but You Shoulda Kept The Same Direction As Poetic. Neways...Your Piece Was Overall Nice As Well, Nice Rhythem and Your Vocab Wasn't Bad. Felt Your Emotion As Well.

Next Time Just Both of Your Pick Your Structure and Style and Stick With It All The Way Through and You'll Have A Solid Ass Drop.

Nice Collaboration...Look Forward To A Follow Up With Your Mistakes Fixed.

~R~