poetic-your piece was packed with emotion n imagery,
it was a goo poetic read liked your vocab, i was fitting
in well n wasnt to complex to get your aspects of
writing across.......good drop...good read.
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valor-i liked the fact you kept a formatted style even
thou it didnt fit all that well as a collab it did with your
direction n the way you protrayed your piece...
stay up, this was a nice read....goo'job to both..

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!