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Old 06-09-05, 03:42 AM   #12
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Daz:

I’ll Easily dismantle this herb, really ive battled nobody wacker
N yes im flippin the bird, just to prove poly’ll choke on a cracker
Nice..I Was Feeling This. 6/10
Your game is over….. ya properties are now part of my gallery
Cuz im running over you, like this is a fuckin monster truck rally
For Some Reason I Laughed..Not Hard Hitting Though 4/10
You’re a mistake…… like homophobic companies hiring gays
Beat me ? how..? when his lines are more tired then drive ways
Decent Metaphor..6/10
You’re the worst I can tell, poly’s fakin on this board n shit
N if your verse was raising hell, Satan would be an orphan kid
Decent..6/10

Overall: 22/40

Monopoly:

Daz Couldn't Drop Dope If He Came With An Ounce Of Weed
He Grip Balls Like Spalding, And I Got This Faggot Bouncing G
Hmm..Wasn't Feeling This..You Tried With A Meta..3/10
Sep 04 You Joined You Got No Life With Over 3,500 Post Kid
If RV Had A Gay Sex League......Daz Would Probably Host It
Ok..4/10
Record 18-3, That Must No Be True But Yo Establish This Man
'Cutting' Your Win Streak Like 'Circulations On Tight Wrist Bands'
Um..Not Hard Hitting..3/10
Daz Winning 'Parapalegics' Have Better Odds Of Doing 'Back Flips'
Call Em A 'Magician' Cuz He Pull's D/R Votes Out Like 'Hat Tricks'
Blah..Kinda Played 4/10
Establish This Fact, Daz Couldn't Win With Four Votes Ahead
Turn Around & Leave This Kid R.I.P......Like Old Folks In Bed
Not A Good Closer..Wack..2/10

Overall: 16/50

Vote - Daz For Better Metaphors and Harder Hitting Punchlines.

*Monopoly You Tried To Get Personals, So Thats Good..Just Get More Creative With Punches and Metaphors and You'll Be Set*

~R~

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