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Old 06-09-05, 08:35 AM   #7
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the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
6...decent personal playin off the bar like that....although i think it cud've been worded better.
claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
5...ok line, but then the setup is not really that relevant to the punch itself.
i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
5...decent punch....gud wordplay with the stumped/tree shit, second line too basic though and more of a statement.
i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
5...half 'n' half again....i think that you came with a fairly weak setup and the punch itself was mediocre.
whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,
5...weak setup, good punchline with decent wordplay in there again.

OVERALL: 26/50 (52%)


think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
6...decent opener, although i dont think the wax wordplay worked all that well, wax/wacks <--that is how it wud've been better, makin the wack plural!!
this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
5...not really feelin this, kinda choppy and the setup was too basic and weak.
easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
6...ok concept in the second line, gud play on his name!!
ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
5...ok wordplay, cud be better and the setup again wasn't all that good.

OVERALL: 22/40 (55%)



daz gets it barely, both were equally consistent, just Daz had a couple of nice punches, E.C only had one, the rest were mediocre, gud punchlines with wack setups. also, it dont seem like either person put that much effort into it....

either way....

V/ - DAZ
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