Voted For: Sakim Aerias

tweety-below are my fav bars...
So many colored souls being sent to heaven, no wonder the sky stays black
Until someone stop this, My people will go through this dangerous disease like plague

^^1st line was dope, 2nd line fell off huge...what happened??
1st n second verse were aight.light the imagery in both parts
emotion was more prodiminent in your 2nd vere thou
to be honest i wasnt really feeling the third part of your verse
althou i liked how you split it n kept the same type of ending
but ultered it slightly to each..awesome take on the topic, i liked how you protrayed it n had great meaning throughout....nice drop man.....stay up
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rev-nice flow n consistency, but i felt your take on the topic
was rather bland, your verse held little to none metaphoric value, it seems you went blank on alot of your piece n just wrote what came to you.....i did however like your ending which was the best part of your piece....it just seems the effort wasnt there.........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!