Voted For: Yung Wun

all dis nigga wanna do is "piss" but his lyrics are "shit"
so what are u? r.kelly?..cuz 80% of dis site is kids*
^^wasnt feeling it......to basic
excuse ya back?..how can u if u lookin towards tha front
oops..my bad, u aint wack..u jus a bleedin cunt**
^^not feeling this either...srry man jus to basic
bastard ass guy offerin a mill as a prize to win a battle
but i dont want it cuz it aint enuff for ya net life to be dismantled***
^^ok,......
i bet u looked at my posts..got a notebook and grabbed a pen
but ya prewritten flows wont get u no where cuz u got exposed afta i checked in****
^^lol,.........ok
dis battle is simple..jus lace up a line and a punch to get a bar
and when people read ya shit they'll realize theres harder "punches" at "teen bars"*****
^^decent
what would ya momma say if she found out dat u was secretly rue paul
dressin in drag..has been username and all******
^^ok,......
i'll stop dis verse right here..probably off tha scale but whateva
if ya mouth is as big as ya bladder u could have tha most money eva*******
^^eh, weak closer.
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I Step To The Podium; For My Openin-Statement, I'll Say I'm Potent-Wit-Great-Grips, So I'm Chokin-This-Fake-Bitch/
^self glory.....
Who's OutSpoken-With-Haste,-Which Earns A Token-For-Face-Lifts...And'll Leave Ya Fuckin Stomach Smokin-From-Eight-Clips!/
^^not really a punch
I'm The Pure Essence Of Talent; I Don't See A Speck-In-Ya-Rhymes, styles Should "Hook Up Wit A Clock" Just To "Get-Wit-The-Times"/
^^time/clocks..very played concept
Here's A Lesson-Of-Mine, Dawg, I'm The Best-Wit-The-Lines...You Aint Got The "Big Guns Like P.Diddy" So You Ain't "Set-Up-To-Shine"!/
^^man stop with the im/my/its all self glory
I've Heard The Speeches-of-Several, My Heat-Is-Incredible, Faggots Put Up Their Defenses, The Breaches-Are-Plentiful/
^^this was better except for the "my heat is incredible"
Whenever Rappers Comin At Me; They Get Sprayed-Wit-A-Round, I Don't Mean "Sex On The Floor" But You'll Get "Laid-On-The-Ground"/
^^decent
I'm A "Hunter" Wit Mad "Game"; Ya Got Ya "Neck Sliced-"In-This-Brawl, So I'm Thinkin "This Bear's Head'll Look Nice-On-My-Wall!"/damn
^^^ok, but im not seeing the relevency to your opponent
HeAt Up
Dude... I'm Lyrical-Wit-Sick-Spits, This Basic Member Sparks-Leavin-Gays-Phased! It's A "Miracle"!-This-Kid's-"Whipped"! And I Ain't Talkin-Bout-"Mayonnaise"!/
^^ok,........
I Put This Herb-In-His-Place, For Him Defeat's-A-Must!
I'm Way Ahead Of You, I'll "Throw Dirt-In-Ya-Face" So "Eat-My-Dust!"/
^^ok
It's So Dumb-To-Challenge-Me, I'm A Veteran,-azz! Ya Too Stunned-Of-Talent-G! You Ain't Even Better-Than-Half!/
^^decent.
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your biggest downfall was self glorification everywhere in your verse, your not focusin on your opponent enough, but other then that you have good lyrical abilities but try n not cap ya letters cuz it stretches ya verse out n makes it look sloppy/stay away from played concept n you'll be fine...

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!