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think ya a manuscript master ? well im here to prove your wacker
cuz you always drops wack(wax)like when candles hit the plaster
^^ Ahhh nice meta, like the creativity of it, decent punch nice opener.

this battle was a bad move-E(movie)like ya choosen the wrong vid.
so im dropping the 'E' kids, cuz the.C(sea)gets split like mosses did..
^^ Ahh i like the personal and the way you word it, made the bar of punch decent.

easily bruise ya ego to blue from black like a fuckin hockey puck mark
cuz its E.C(easy)to leave C spinning in circles, like damn copy write mark
^^^ ANother personal, off his name. Meh, didnt feel that was a effective punch, meh maybe it just me

ya should've stalled, cuz wack n lame is what ya mixtures called...
n after this battle he’ll be leaf-in(leavin)the sight like pictures of fall…
^^ Nice wordplay here, I like the set up line and the punch along with it, nice closer

Overall=This verse was good decent punches, and wordplays, had meta'z in there, but you could've come harder i've seen better from you, but this was a good drop.

the bar in your sig is nice, but still everyone knows that daz is lieing,
you contradict yourself, coz ur verses are the reason why RV is dyeing,*
^^ Hmmmm coud've word it a bit different, but this was a ok punch, ok opener.

claiming you "god" stop living in the "clouds" and start to communicate,
coz if you had a "halo" over your head, you could still never illuminate**
^^ The 1st line was blah punch unless that was a set up line, the 2nd was ok punch, not great nor weak, but a ok effective punch.

i'm leaving daz stumped, i guess i'm knocking down his tree,
your battles are slept, coz it's the only time i'm seeing "Z's", ***
^^^ Ahh got a wordplay in here, it was ok, i've seen it beofre....Played. THe 2nd line is played also....making this not a effective punch.

i'll stomp on this faggot, like a dino he's rarer than prehistoric eggs,
not because he's dope but becuase he finishes on last legs,****
^^^ Ok, i felt this wasn't a hard punch, i felt it could've been better.

whats the point in spittin, aint no one wanna hear your fake fury,
like i demolished buildings, he fell down, all dust and no glory,
^^ Meh Didn't like the closer at all, but it was a effective punch but weak.

Overall=E.C. You had good few bars of decent punches, but the rest was blah man, either it was played out or it was a weak punch attempt. But you had an ok verse.

Conclusion=This was an "ok" battle, daz you had good punches, nice flow with wordplay and meta'z. I'mma have to vote for daz because he came harder with the punches, even though he had a played line (moses) he came back up on his next line, and the closer was a decent wordplay. E.C. The only reason i've not voted for you, because your punches didnt hit harder, Wordplays was good, but the punches wasn't connecting. They were effective but it wasn't hard to beat daz....

No hate

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E.C. Return a favor in my battle with drakel man, honest vote.