Thread: E.C vs Ackrite
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Old 06-09-05, 09:45 AM   #11
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you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^^ok, but basic
The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^^nice personal...ownage
Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^^decent, but come off as self glory a bit
I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
^^lol,.ok
You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^^seen this concept b4 off 9th dgree..
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overall you had a dope bar/personal in there
alot of soso bars...overall consistent verse
in a sense that nothin was wack.........,
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Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^^ok, but you forced ya ryhme scheme bad here
Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^^nah,i got it but to far fetched...ko dont=ku
Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^^decent wordplay i was feelin this
Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
^^wasnt feeling the wordin or punch
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^^feeling the meta..setup was iffy thou..
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overall you had a decent verse n the consistency was there
but you lacked in hard hitting punches...this was very close.
you just didnt capitalize on your bars n make them effective enough..good battle thou..cuz itwas close
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!