Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193153

^^ RETURN A FAVOR KHAOZ..........


GreasedUp Hands Frum Da Lube Man, So Ur ''2 slick 2 handle''?
How U Ever Gon Be ''Jack Shit''?
BITCH! Ya Dont Even Have Da ''Elevation'' 2 Leap A Candle
^^ Aiight, i like the wordplay here, good opener of a punch.

Slik? Added The L, Realized He Aint ''Sik' After Diz LOSS
Catchin Beat Downz
U Paid Da Mental & Physical Cost, But Styll Aint Da Boss
^^ Alright I like the personal punch you threw on here, the 2nd line was blah...but the 1st line was good.

Randy Moss? Nope. U Aint Never ''Backin'' Up Ur ''Linez''
Street Struggle?
British Kid ''Mixin Fruits'' In a Blender Is Hiz Idea Ov ''Da Grind''
^^ Meh i didnt like this bar at all, wasn't a good effective punch.

Talents Hard 2 Find, Believe..It Usually Dont Come In Pairs
Only Time ''All Eyez On U'' Iz ''Trippin'' Down Da ''Stares''
^^ It was an ok punch, could've been better.

U Gotz No Authentiq ''FloW'' Ya Shitz Juz A ''Dub''[W][get it?]
Ya 2 ''slik'' 2 Be Tight, Datz Why U Cant ''Fit Da Glove''*
^^ I like this decent punch with a wordplay. Good closer

Overall=I liked your verse man, had some few mistakes, but you pulled up. Had some good punches with some good wordplays....Meh keep it up, put down some more personals though.


Slik flow- I'm not going to even break down your verse, because it wasn't special nor good. Your punches was weak and played, and your structure wasn't good either. And Most of them punches you threw didnt even make sense

Like..

is yo birthday really June 11, 1991..is that really true?
no wonder you suck and hav no crew

^^ That didnt made sense at all


Conclusion= My vote goes to Khaoz Theory cause his punches was actually better than slik flow. Slik flow you had weak punches with no attemp of it effective. My vote goes to Khaoz because he threw down harder punches

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