Voted For: Sakim Aerias

As the whip slashes on my back, I heavily barked with tears
Every hit takes a inch of my live away, to me as I know it is near
The scars on my back stays on like an tattoo with agonizing pain
My arms are fully hanged and chain, my shirt fill with blood stains
So many people like me go through this every day, some don’t live long
Picking up cottons under the hot sun, we’re weak, they’re too strong
Our bones being showed under the tight skin, were too hopeless to fight
Kids dieing by dehydration, but no coffins they’re body decay by ant bites
So many colored souls being sent to heaven, no wonder the sky stays black
Until someone stop this, My people will go through this dangerous disease like plague


Racism

Forcefully hit by the water hose, hurting my ribs. Tears gas stinging my eyes
Beating me on the ground, by nightsticks. My legs are sore, unable to arise
I see the same thing to my left and my right; kids screaming from the top of their lungs
The pepper spray is burning their tongue, I see knuckle fist being swung
This whole thing started, by judging the belief, of is god is black or white
They didn’t like how the bible was written, and we were unable to unite
God had wool hair, god had tan skin and that all revolves us “black”
They wanted us out., they did it by threat, and killing, putting our bodies in a sack
As I’m getting the severe scars by hate and envy, I yell and cry
No wonder the sky is black, too many colored souls is being sent to the sky




.:We is black:.


We’re being judged by the white faces, that don’t like the colors
They killed, my sister, my brother. Who can stop this dangerous chapter?
Trapped in a world, of non-equal. It’s like being split in 2 worlds
With heavily fear pouring down on us, tears always being hurled
Our screams remains deafness to them, also the chapter seven, heaven
Bruises on our backs, from whips to fist, that come fast like lighten
Young souls, don’t have a chance of the future, being sent northward early
It’s like being trapped in Hitler’s world, were everything is so deathly
They yell, “We hate you, we hate you, GET OUT OF HERE! Die”
As we look up, and take our deadly fate, the cloud is so black no wonder
………………………So many colored souls is in the sky

Iight u cant be faulted in any way shape or form, nyce choice ov topic..imagination wuz not needed because u used real lyfe stories & happenings in da world & put ur self in da position it happend 2 u, i wuz really feelin dat, & me being black culd relate 2 alot ov ur concepts. da emotion wuz well expressed thru da words & topics & frum diz peice i'd say u was a lil modern day malcolm x lol...really nyce job, u killed it.

Vote=Tweety, better concept wit da slavery thing, both wuz a real enjoyable read but da slavery thing wuz damn near a masterpeice

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