fuuuuuuuuuck, i posted a bunch ov feed 4 revelation on hiz verse but i put it in his box under his topic then forgot 2 copy n paste it after i left feed on tweetys verse!!!!!

Ok..........sorry 4 da inconvience

Revelation:

Ur topic wuz good, emotion wuz evident thru ur expression ov words, creativity on the sceheme ov ur peice wuznt as strong as tweetys but it was styll good & pretty damn complex, vocab wuz strong, imagination wuz real good....only thing u lacked dat tweety had wyz da concepot & da way he played off da topic using slavery, kno wat i mean? sorry 4 da weak brake down but u gota understand i wrote a damn essay on ur verse & forgot 2 copy n paste it into tweetys voting box so my bad...good job though revelation, juz needed 2 be more creative wit ur scheme ov da topic

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