RapVerse.com Community - View Single Post

Voted For: AckRite

Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
^^ Meh the link dont work, but nice personal and a punch.

Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
^^ Ahhhh Nice personal with a decent punch.

Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
^^ Meh i didnt like this bar of punch...gay jokes are played.

Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!
^^ Alright both bars of punches was the rapist line got me rolling, nice decent punch w/ the closer.

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
^^ Meh i didnt like this opener in my eyes, ok punch.

The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
^^ Ok punch, should've word it better, then it'll be a decent punch, but its an ok punch.

Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
^^ LMAO! i like this punch, here decent with a personal. good wordplay.

I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
-Meh man this was played....I've seen this line so many times but word differently but still played out

You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)
^^ Alright i got it, it was a good wordplay with a punch.

Conlcusion=Both had good verse, but my vote goes to AckRite, he had decent wordplays with a punches w/ personals. E.C. you had few good lines, but the punches wasn't hitting harder than ackrite, for the reason because your punches wasn't word correctly, i suggest next time do more wordplays with personals and make it a punch, cause that "phaat" line was a example, but dawg the rest didnt hit harder..

Blah return a favor E.C. And ACKRITE