Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente

nice drop.........

small font is hard to read though.....
structure was nice, ya whole verse flowed well from beginning to end and ya had a nice overall feel to the verse, approached the topic well and stayed on point throughout, didnt come at all basic with the vocabs, a nice depiction of the topic and i think the whole way you flipped it from mother to daughter was cool, also used some old english text in there which i liked, i think it added a little more feeling to the parts.....overall 8/10


HNIC
not a bad drop.....
structure was aight but cud use work, still the whole verse flowed well...i do think that you lacked direction in places and tended to slip away from the overall verse, it was more like a mixed verse to me, you started off dope with complexity and good feeling depicting a nice image of the topic, but near to the middle it got more basic and fell off which is what i think ruined ya verse....if ya wud've stayed more consistent i think you would have stood a better chance.....6/10


V/ - Tweety (aka artistica mente)

RTF!! on the dizzee rascal battle!!!

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