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Old 06-09-05, 11:16 AM   #14
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Voted For: Drakel

TWEETY-your verse was good, imagery was soli, vocab could be better n your flow was off in alot of areas, but you kept to the topic which was key.all in all good verse, but i think you gotta work on your emotion, try to protray more of it in ya pieces........good verse........pz
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drakel-dope vere, i was impressed with the majority of
ya piece, it was solid throughout but you didnt end it as
well as i was hoping...but you did keep to the topic overall n didnt stray to far....
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overall i gotta go with drakel, he had the slightly better drop
no hate, both came well in this topic...good work...
please rtf on nos n mines topical.....both of you..pz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!