Voted For: Denied Truth

Yo this was an ok battle. i think both of you did well. but i think denied truth had the best verse. i thought his structure was easier to read and therefore made for a better flow. He had better punchlines and stayed consistent with his verse in terms of quality of content. He focused on quality over quantity meanin he concentrated on getting his verse tight rather than having a longer verse.
My favourite line in this battle was:

"Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds
Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes""

because i thought the rhyme structure was nice and the vocab was at a higher level.

"Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops
In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop"

I thought that closer was nice for real, with one final insult to leave him with.

I generally wasn't feelin Twisted verse as muc. Ain't nothin personal. Don't get me wrong i thought his verse was ok. i just prefered Denied Truth's verse.

Peace

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