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Old 06-09-05, 12:01 PM   #1
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Voted For: Twizted.

Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds
Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes"
6...decent wordplay, threw in a nice multi in there to make a dope punch.
Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt..
Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert..
4...weak here, the first line to me seems more like ya praisin him than dissin him.
Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops
In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop
5...an ok punch, decent wordplay, but cud be far better.

OVERALL: 15/30 (50%)



You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S...
Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!...
5...not feelin this opener, first line kinda filler and too basic.
Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes...
But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig)
6...LoL!! decent personal, very humurous.
You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats...
Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy)
6...again, nice personal this time playin off the avy, ok wordplay but still cud be better.
I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry...
Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!...
5...not feelin this, had a weak herb feel to it and more shit talkin than dissin.
I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse...
I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!...
4...weak, more self-glorifying than punching, not good!!

OVERALL: 26/50 (52%)


twizted came more consistent
had a couple of played concepts, some mediocre lines, but sum decent personals in there to....
denied came consistent, but the consistensy was with basic punches, nuthin that really stood out to me, also didnt utilize the line limit to its advantage....

V/ - Twizted.
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