Banned: Cheating
From: N.Y./born in Trinidad |
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Well,it was Ok.Flow was off at certain points however.Basic rhyme scheme but don't matter.
As for ur content....something of this topic needs to be packed with mind-blowing metas.U had some decent ones but nothing special.This was a decent verse...but didn't paint an image that'd stay with the reader for a long time.~1~
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