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Voted For: Devolve
Stanza- The best aspect from your verse was imaginary, The emotion kinda lacked in this verse. You had a great balance of vocab in your verse. But next time i suggest you use wordplays and meta'z unto your imaginary, but overall, this was a ok drop.
Devolve- Alright man, you had good imaginary, you had a great balance from your vocab. You had good balance of metaphors, I liked how you portray with words man...it was a nice drop.
CONCLUSION= Alright This battle has to be vote on by imaginary. The emotion ya'll BOTH need working on. Alright stanza you had good imaginary, but you didnt put out much details like devolve, and the metaphors was good. Alright...Devolve i vote for you because you put out alot of details in your imaginary, you had great balance of vocab in your verse. Metaphors was there, stanza the only reason i didnt vote for you because you had LESS details in your imaginary....
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