Voted For: E.C

you "choke" n' squeem, at the site of the glock ready to bust,
Ackrite got "athsma"?...... You'd be better off biting the "dust",
The only way you got the record was from winning pussy fights,
How am i meant to lose a battle wit a Marques Houston lookalike,
Your "Atkins" lyrics must be "burning calories on us Emcees"
Must be you who's losing weight,
....................... coz you could never be phatter than me,
I'm all up in your face, like fat bitches wearing thongs,
You off the hook? i garentee that was just a string along,
You aint worth shit... fuck, i dont know why i bust a vein,
Coz delivering glass is the only time u bringing the pane, (pain)

Pretty decent flow throughout, good personalz in da verse 2..wasnt feelin yo opener, bout da only line dat wuz whack az fuck lol da thong thing izza lil played, but datz ok, u used it 2 iight effect, punz were hard hittin 4 da most part, overall it wuz a decent verse, good job..


Establish This..Your A Fagget Bitch, Need Straight Eyes 4 Seein
Said It Yaself, You Gain NO RESPECT....& Admitted It In A PM!
Nigga Why Waste Time On Losin...Cuz Beatin ACT Ya Cant Do
Outcome Of Our Battles Ya Birthplace Backwards...Imma K-o U! (U.K....K.U.)
Meetin Up Wit Ya Boyfriend Lata?..Figured I'll Help The Situation
& 'Rain Bows' On His Body to Get Him Dressed 4 The Occasion!
Diseased As A Young Child So In His Mind, Infection = Relation!
Ya Raps Travel...Cuz Their Forced Here Like Rapist Immigration!
My Verse You Datin.....So 'ACT Formal' Lyke DIRECT Invitations
Ya Brain Misplacement
.................Caused 'PURE Cockiness' Lyke Water Ejaculations!

Dope shyt, sum iight lines, wuznt feelin dat uk thing & i wuznt feelin yo closer, very weak closer & dat infectionm/relation thing wuz a good idea, juz worded wrongly....good creativity in yo wordplay, no personals & da punz wuznt exactly hard hittin, but yo punz wuld ov been improved if u added a few personalz in yo verse, good job though

Vote=E.C


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