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Old 06-09-05, 04:27 PM   #10
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Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente

Yeah, tweety be sick with topicals.

both had a nice flow and decent vocab. but i managed to get more involved in tweetys, nice structure and a good story line in the backing.

HNIC yours was good dont get me wrong, you have a lot of potential but you need to make it deeper in the future.

NO hate, tweety RTF in sig within 3 days!!
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