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Old 06-09-05, 04:34 PM   #45
Dervla
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Voted For: Yung Wun

R STYLEZ- Alright man you had some played punches in your verse, you had personals which was great, but you should've word your lines more correctly to make it a effective punch. It was all tooooo basic punches and personal but no wordplays no meta'z.....This was overall a weak verse R STYLEZ...

Wayne- Meh nothing special in your verse, you had wordplays, punches was meh good and few of them played out. You need to elevate on structure man, the lines are too stretch. And elevate on punches mane, you had str8 wordplays but few LESS few were punches.


Overall=I vote for wayne because he came harder, with the wordplays...BOTH had weak punches...So i voted on wordplays....But Wayne had a punch attempt while R stylez punches was played out making his whole verse and bar's weak....

Vote/ Wayne..1
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