Aight Its Like This..

H-N-I-C:

I Was Feeling Your Piece A Lot. Your Vocabulary Was Potent and Your Imagery Was On Topic, but Your Emotion and Direction Is What I Thought Lacked. A Lot of Fillers Within Your Verse That Kept Beating Around The Bush and I Felt Your Emotion Wasn't There. That Was Your Only Downfall.

Tweety:

Aight, Well Yours Was Almost The Complete Opposite of H-N-I-Cs. Your Direction and Emotion Was Fabulous but Your Vocabulary Lacked A Lot. You Get My Vote Because Your Imagery Was Consistent and You Took 3 of The 4 Categories That I Look For When I Vote.

Vote - Tweety For More Emotion, Direction, and Imagery.

~R~