Voted For: R-Rated

imma brake it down bar 4 bar lyke errybody else do

Ya audio is wack, that’s why they tried hidin ya tracks on the mix-tape..
Cudn’t get ya ‘shit on lock’ if ya ‘took a dump in a fuckin Scots lake’..
^not a good opening bar dawg, nuthin played, juz wuznt feeling da concepts

Ya text crew battles get you into heaven, I don’t mean ya spittin well though..
Its just ya put ya name up for a text spot, and everybodies like “HELL NO!�..
^really nyce bar, but da concept & maning in which u used da punch & personal wuz effectless, cuz if he does topicals, he does topicalz, there iz nuthin wrong wit dat

Try to hide bein a retard…switched the letters round to make ya name..
Name used to be half ‘text’ but ya still ‘lay’ it like ya usin’ half ya brain..
^poor first line, really good second line, way 2 revive da bar dawg

5 votes to win a battle…funnily enough Rated’s referrals have got 5 hits..
Not to imply that you cheat…more like why you still bringin more shit..
^ feelin errythin up until ''more like why u still bringin more shit''

Like the shit in ya sig ya can’t ‘raise the bar’ cuz lyrically ya lines fall..
Forever dwellin’ on the past………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦â€¦
Cuz vote-wise you’ll always be wonderin why ya never got five-for..

in yo accent da closer may rhyme, but not in my accent foo' lol but dat iz not a fault if i talk british it sorta rhymes, good closer.

I heard da personalz were fake, so i can only believe wat i am told so dat took da sting out ov bar 1 & 2, rest ov ur verse wuz ok, not da best i seen frum u by a longshot homeboy.


You Winning Hands Down??...Equipped Wita Solo King Back-To-Back...
Watch Me Draw and Fold Kings Quick..Rateds Facts Are Ace-Stacked..
^ok wordplay off a deck ov cards lol, nuthin special

Kid You Couldn't Knock Me Out...Even If You Were Jahovas Witness..
Could Lace Ya Punches With Disease..and Still Not Spit Verbal Sickness..
good opening line, poorly worded second line

Claim To Be The Open Mic Comdeic Genius...but Ya Speks Are Broke..
But I Guess That Name Does Fit You...Cause All Your Texts' A Joke..
^best bar ov da battle, da second line made me laugh

This Battle Is A Complete Upset..Like Premature Ejaculaters In Orgies..
And By Married To The Game..King Solo Will Be On Rapvese Till He's 40..
^good opening line, very weak second

I'll Pave A Highway To Hell In Chinese Subscript To Leave You Fo-Kissed..
You Claim The King Has Returned...It Must Hurt That Nobodies Noticed..
^ decent punch & personal

Good verse dawg, wordplay wuz off da chain mayn. personals were on point, few punches were weak, az were solo'z though, so u got lucky wit dat.

Vote=R-Rated, better verse on da whole, more creative wordplay, better use ov personalz, nuthin 2 peronsal, but juz enuff 2 get u da vote

plz return da favor in mah signature or vote will be removed

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