Voted For: Devolve

stanza=
2 basic, nuthin out ov da oedinary creative wise. very poor vocabulary also, noit much imagination within ur verse & it wuz a lil hard 2 find any emotion in da words u exopressed, u culd ov used da scheme ov ur topic 2 much more effect, itz and ez win 4 devolve

Devolve=
good strong topical, vocab wuz strong, u seemed 2 have a more complex scheme an concept 2 ur peice. emotion wuz strong, especially towrds da end, u started off a lil slow but after da ''lashing havoc batter the shores'' line, u really picked up on emotion, imagination & creativity wuz good throughtout da peice, good enjoyable read.

Vote=Devolve-more emotion & a more complex scheme 2 da chosen concept.

rtf

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